Sunday, 19 February 2012

Heartbreak

Just to give you warning. This isn't about me. I'm fine truly. This is based partly on The Fault In Our Stars but the relationship is between two fictional characters (I can't reveal who- spoilers- but those who know should be able to guess).
Anyway I hope you enjoy!


Heartbreak

Roses are red,
Violets are blue
It was a privilege to have
My heart broken by you

Though my heart is in pieces
Each piece still loves you
A choice I am happy with
A choice not thought through

You left more than footprints
You tread not with care
You took more than pictures
Now taint with despair

You claim that the fault
Lies in me, or the stars
But never in you
The fault is not yours

Yet you chose to end this
You broke my heart
You slept with another
You tore us apart

4 comments:

  1. First of all: That poem was AMAZING
    Second: I think I know who that is about. But I can't be sure... *shrugs*

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  2. *hugs*
    This is a beautiful yet sad poem. It shows such a depth of love that the brokenhearted person still loves the one who was careless.
    A person who loves like that should n ever be let go and treasured.
    I will always love and treasure you Octa. May God strike me down if I ever hurt you.
    *hugs him an dnever lets go*

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  3. This is so bittersweet. I'm fairly certain I know who this is about, and this is a wonderful, sorrowful poem about it.

    Fantastic, Octa.

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  4. I STILL NEED TO READ TFiOS.

    AHHHHHHHH.

    Anyhow- beautiful poem, as always (I'm running out of original comments, can you tell?).

    This is really quite beautiful, in a sad, bittersweet way. I especially love the first stanza. :)

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