Real as Rage
Send
entry in
Waiting
Frustrating
I
never win
What’s
the big deal?
Too
abstract
Surreal
People
want to relate
Facts
not fantasy
Write
about something that’s real
Then
you’ve appeal
Be
direct
Well
I can’t get more direct than this
Hey
you! Yes you!
I’ve
a message to share
I
don’t care
I’ll
write what I like
Imagination
Creation
Whole
new worlds
Don’t
need to address the situation
In
some war torn poverty struck nation
Facing
devastation
Watch
me soar
Watch
me roar
On
some alien shore
Characters
galore
And
I’ve plenty more
Where
that came from.
Please
appreciate
Try
to relate
The
message is there
If
you want it to be
You
see
My
poetry is what you make it
How
you shape it and take it
I’m
letting you know how I feel
Hope
that it’s real enough
For
your anti-fiction addiction
But
enough of my rage
I’m
reaching the end of the page
Will
probably end it
Now.
Octa, this is BRILLIANT!
ReplyDeleteI can totally relate to this! As soon as I strarted reading the first words, I'm grinned and thought, "Now THIS is brilliance! Who knew that you could vent your utter rage into such a wonderful poem?"
And I'll be damned if no one recognises your genius. You are AWESOME, I swear. Also, iI love the way you ended it!
"I'm reaching the end of my page,
I will probably end it,
Now"
XD
Damn, Octa, this is amazing!
OCTA FTW! :D
This is amazing
ReplyDeleteThis poem written by Octa
the poet of purple places
I relate so much
to your maaaaaaaagical poems
even if they're often overflowing with fantasy
I wanted to make a responds poem
(because I hate my English teacher)
and to represent caged writing pieces
but poems take a lot of work
(that's why you people are so great)
and I'm not that good at them.
but besides that
I'm not going to follow rules.
Because this is just plan writing, people.
And I guess I could think of a good ending, but-
I DO WHAT I WANT, OKAYY??
:D :D :D :D
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Love the poem Mar!
People need to think in the abstract
ReplyDeleteOtherwise life is no fun
Awesome poem :D